Chữa bài IELTS Task 2
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The issue of whether government should invest money in art or spend completely these money for improving health and education remains a matter for debate. From my perspective, I strongly agree with specific statement that government had better upgrade quality of education as well as health-care services because of its positive effects on citizens.
Firstly, investing in healthcare services have multiple profound effects which contribute to better healthy body as well as reducing such illness as cancer and other potentially fatal diseases. An illustration here is hospital where will be equipped well-developed facilities which assist patients quickly overcome their diseases. Moreover, effective healthcare services give opportunities to promote mental and physical health of people. Therefore, the available of these sectors as well as good habits allows people own excellent health and enhance labor productivity.
Secondly, using budgets to upgrade educational standards provide a variety of benefits for the general public. It is undoubtedly that investing in this item allows government enhances their citizens’ awareness as well as sharpens human resources. In this way, highly educated people are able to gain considerable achievements which can upgrade economy and other fields of a country. Further, there is a direct connection between lack of education and crimes; for using money to invest in education gives opportunities to reduce the proportion of shocking and ruthless crimes committed by children.
In conclusion for the reasons mentioned above, I hold the view that government should do invest in health-care services as well as education, not completely invest in art, that provide considerable benefits for their citizens and reduce various social problems.
Hi LinD, do you have the question in full?
hi Tran Nguyen, this is the full question :): Many countries spend a lot of money on art. Some people think investment in art is necessary, but others say money is better spent in improving health and education. State your opinion and give explanations and examples?
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