• Chữa bài IELTS Task 1

    • nguyenthanhnga.23597

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      Tháng Mười Hai 12, 2017 vào lúc 5:06 chiều

      Practice 18: The table below shows the consumer durables (telephone, refrigerator, etc.) owned in Britain from 1972 to 1983
      Consumer durables
      1972
      1974
      1976
      1978
      1979
      1981
      1982
      1983
      Percentage of
      households:








      Central heating
      33
      43
      48
      52
      55
      59
      60
      64
      Television
      93
      95
      96
      96
      97
      97
      97
      98
      Video







      18
      Vacuum cleaner
      87
      89
      92
      92
      93
      94
      95

      Refrigerator
      73
      81
      88
      91
      92
      93
      93
      94
      Washing machine
      73
      81
      88
      91
      92
      93
      93
      94
      Dishwasher



      3
      3
      4
      4
      5
      Telephone
      42
      50
      54
      60
      67
      75
      76
      77

      The table compares the percentages of electronic household appliances owned by British families between 1972 and 1983.
      Overall, there was a upward trend in the proportion of households using these given items over the period of 12 years. Moreover, TV was always the most popular appliance while dishwasher was the least common item during the given period in Britain.
      As can be seen from the table that in 1972, almost one-third of British households owned the central heating machine. After that, this figure nearly doubled in 1983 with 64%. There was a slight rise in the percentage of British familes having television in their home from 93% in 1972 to 98% in 1983, which made TV still the most popular item compared to other remaining appliances. Whereas, no households used the video until 1983 with a mere 18%. Then, vacuum cleaner, refrigerator and washing machine were three popular items after TV ranging from 73% to 95%. The dishwasher was first introduced in 1978 in Britain; however, this appliance was still new to British people when these figures accounted for only 3-5% from 1978 to 1983. The 12- year period witnessed a significant increase of 34% in the percentage of households owning telephone in Britain, then this figure reached a peak of 77% at the end of this period.
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      Tháng Mười Hai 13, 2017 vào lúc 5:43 chiều

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