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    Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are actually important for a country.
    Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

    Authorities’ belief and focus on economic development have recently aroused a controversial argument for their citizens. Many advocate for the government’s idea as they think it is currently the most vital job of the country, others claim there are more than just economic field we need to work on in some respects. From my perspective, I am in favor of the former for a number of specific reasons.

    On the one hand, it can be said for a fact that concentration on other fields like agriculture, industry and human can help gain a lot of unexpected advantages. Apparently, investing fairly will bring the country a more considerably comprehensive development since all forms of issues are solved without suspense. For example, the matter of irrigation can be puzzled out shortly driving away all residents’ concerns if the states care more about trivial but crucial problems. Furthermore, considering all sorts of developments ensure that nothing might unfortunately be degraded due to the lack of attention. This make the leaders keep track of their national situations preventing unwanted alarming cases may happen.

    Conversely, I would strongly emphasize that hardly any work can be done without the presence of money. Indeed, investment in economic allows the ministry to develop a richer and more prosperous country, leading to the big increase in budget. For example, fostering trades internationally not only lets human to acquire more knowledge but also earn a great deal of money. Therefore, admittedly, the priority in economic is immensely necessary because it will financially strengthen the government giving them opportunities to progress other genres of field in general.

    All things considered, while thoroughly monitoring should be taken into serious consideration, in the first place we really need to have a substantial financial base.

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