July 24, 2017 at 8:49 am #119739
Nguyen Ngoc Tuong DiemParticipant
Topic: Some people think that the best way to reduce crimes is to apply
longer prison sentences, other people think that there are better methods
of doing so. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
A certain portion of the population belive that additional increase
the punishment for criminal is the effectively solution to reducing the
crime rate. Meanwhile, the other people agree that punishment is not the
best solution to reducing the crime rate. While there are benefits of
implenment the longer prison punishment, I would agrue that it is not the
best solution to preventing the recidivism rate.
There are many benefits of increment the prison sentence. The longer
jail punishment could deter individuals from comitting crimes in the first
place. The fear of punishment can instill in the heart of potential
criminals. Additionally, during the time in jail, the sinner will have
opportunity to get reformed through many service available inside. For
example, they could adjust their behaviour and tranform their aware to
become a good person thought educated activity in the jail.
On contrary, there are better solution to reduce the criminal rate
than implement the longer jail punishment such as community service or
educational program. Some researchs which were conducted by non-profit
organisation has pointed out that people has tend to be more compassionate
after spending time with people from underprivileged background. Thanks to
this method, people are become less posibility to transgress heinous crimes
since the increment sympathy. I completely support for this solution since
it could address the motive of crime act.
To summarize, even though the additional increase the punishment does
have some benefits, it seems to me that the alternative methods is better
solution to keeping the lower recidivism rate.
July 26, 2017 at 12:31 am #120289
[7/26/2017, 12:31:12 AM] Cám ơn các bạn!
July 26, 2017 at 9:46 am #120363
Cảm ơn bạn!
July 26, 2017 at 9:50 am #120367
Cảm ơn bạn.
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