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    Phạm Khánh Như
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    Nowadays, celebrities increasingly have the status of role models, in particular for younger people. Do you see this as a positive or negative development?
    In recent years, regarding a famous person as their role model has become an increasingly popular trend among youngsters. While I accept that this brings about a number of benefits, I believe that the drawbacks are also worth considering.
    On the one hand, there are a multitude of celebrities who exemplify their fans in a positive way. Firstly, a successful career of a celebrity can exert tremendous influences on people admiring them. The story of their way to to success, of how their consistently pursue their dream, of how they overcome adversities and obtacles can positively affect their fans, and as a result will inspire and encourage them to do the same. Furthermore, celebrities can also be a good example in terms of a healthy lifestyle and a warm heart. A great number of famous people show their contribution to the society by doing volunteer work, donating to organizations for the handicapped or orphanages and so on. This is unquestionably a lifestyle that should be appreciate and followed.
    On the other hand, there are also celebrities that set bad examples on other people. Firstly, a small number of famous people did not achieve success via their talent but scandals. For example, Paris Hilton is only known for her extravagant and negative lifestyle rather than any talent,which can create an illusion on the young that they can easily become well-known without talent. Secondly, toxic lifestyles as well as negative manners of several celebrities can also adversely influence their teenaged fans. There are a variety of wrongdoings including drug addition, alcohol addiction, assault, fraud and so on. These actions need to be criticised in order for teenagers to be aware and not to follow in their idols’ footstep.
    In conclusion, although it is undeniable that some celebrities did a good job as a role model for the young, the potential setbacks of this trend should also be in contemplation.

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    Cảm ơn bạn.

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    Cảm ơn bạn.

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