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TASK2- Problems and soltution- CITY LIFE

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    People living in large cities today face many problems in their daily life. What are these problems? Should governments encourage people to move to smaller regional towns?
    It is undeniable that urban citizens tend to experience more problems in their daily life than those who live in the rural counterparts. I believe that the government should encourage people to move to rural areas as the way to tackle the issues.
    There are several problems that people who live in major cities have to deal with. The first problem is that they might face to to the high rate of unemployment. This is because major cities are always considered to be promissing lands then millions of people flock to these areas to look for jobs. This situation accidentally make these places become so competitive that people find hard to make a living. The second is that the high cost of living expenses might be a financial burden for citizens. Many people have difficulty paying for rent, ultility bills and other living fees. Consequently, urban life is more likely to increase stressful that people are constantly under the pressure due to heavy workload and the harsh urban life.
    However, these problems would be prevented if the governments encourage more people move to rural areas as the way to reduce pressure on major cities. Firstly, once more people leave cities, unemployment problem would be solved. This is because many small towns are less developed due to labour shortage. Governments, therefore, can encourage labour force to move to those areas and provide financial support to those who are willing to relocate to rural areas. Secondly, rural life is more peaceful that is beneficial for people’s health. This, as a result, can reduce people stress and make their life calm and peaceful.
    In conclusion, in my opinion the fact that major cities are more likely to have serious threats to citizens. However, aforementioned solution should be taken into consideration to combat the problems.

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