• Chữa bài IELTS Task 1

    • nguyenthikhanhnguyen.iu

      Participant
      June 18, 2019 at 3:02 pm

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      The table shows the number of employees and factories producing silk in England and Wales between 1851 and 1901.

      The given table illustrates the figures for the number of workforce in silk production in 2 countries from 1851 to 1901.
      It can be clearly been seen that the number of worker in the 2 countries decrease over 50 years and the female employees have more than male in the industry. Although the number of worker was decline but the quantity of manufacturing factories increased fluctuation over 50 years.
      In 1851, the workforce was at its peak, with 130750 employees, including 76786 females and 5400 males. In contrast, the number of factories was at least in 1851, at only 272. However, after 10 years, the number of silk factories had almost tripled reach 761, while the total number of employee significant fall of over 20000 people.
      Over the following 40 years, the total number of female and male worker gradually decrease throughout the period, to 25567 and 13375, which resulted in a drop of total number of worker, at 38942 in 1901. Meanwhile, the number of silk factories go down over 40 years, from 761 in 1861 to 623 in 1901.

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    • congthanh

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      June 19, 2019 at 8:16 pm

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      Grammar: https://IELTSPLANET.INFO/COURSE/IVY-GRAMMAR/
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