Chữa bài IELTS Task 2
Research recently shows an increasing number of business meetings and business taking place online. Do advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
It is undeniable that technological explosion has revolutionized how people communicate with each other. In this context, video conferencing meetings are becoming popular. In my opinion, this trend is better than harm.
On the one hand, online meeting brings about various benefits. Firstly, it plays a decisive role decreasing traffic jam as people could stay at home and have a meeting through video conferencing. As a result, the number of people commuting to work will decrease considerably. Secondly, people do not take much time to travel to workplace. Rather than spending many hours on the road, they could use this time wisely to solve the volume of tasks. Therefore, this leads to high productivity.
On the other hand, video business meeting is not necessarily convenient. In spite of not time-consuming, people usually misunderstand the viewpoints of the others, which possibly leads to damages. For example, when the team discusses, then there is a technological mistake. They start to miss some important points that play a decisive role in the project. Consequently, the team could not obtain company’s objective on time.
In conclusion, advantages of online meetings far outweigh the disadvantages. It greatly contributes to decrease the pressure on roads and bring about various benefits.Attachments:
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