Chữa bài IELTS Task 2
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Question: More and more students are choosing to study at colleges and universities in a foreign country. Many people think this development is really positive . Do you agree or disagree?
My presentation
Many people support the opinion that it is a really positive development when a lot of students are choosing to attend school or universities outside their home countries . I partly agree with this idea.
There are many benefits of studying abroad. Firstly, student can get a more valuable degree. This is because better educational systems include international prestigious universities and modern schooling curriculum with the engagement of experienced educators so they will have the chance to see a side of their major that they may not have been exposed to at home. Secondly , learners may study new languages effectively . Study abroad offers international students an opportunity to get approach native speakers and therefore improve pronunciation. Finally, they will have a chance to explore new cultures. For example, not only could abroad students in Japan experience delicious local cuisines such as shushi, mochi …., but also achieve a great amount of knowledge related to many tourist atractions like : Mount Fuji, Hiroshima Peace Memorial Park…
Apart from advantages, there are two challenges for international students. One difficulty is that abroad study costs students a great deal of money. It is common knowledge that students who study abroad might afford more exorbitant fees such as living fee, accommodation fee, tuition fee because they do not receive any funding from local organizations. Another difficulty is language barriers , which make students feel isolated because they hardly communicate with local people as well as native students
In conclusion, , study abroad has more advantages than disadvantages.If you have any questions, please feel free to contact me!
Hi, there. I afraid that I don’t think my essay is good enough to get 7.0, especially in terms of task respond and there are some grammatical mistakes you have not yet addressed. May you go over it again?
And my word count is under 250 words.
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