Chữa bài IELTS Task 1

TOPIC: The two pie charts below show the online shopping sales for retail sectors in Canada in 2005 and 2010.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The chart compare the percentage of Internet sales in terms of four retail sectors in Canada in two years 2005 and 2010.
Overall, the proportion of online sales for four categories changed significantly in 2005 and 2010. While the figures for food and beverage and also video games increased, the figures for the other two sectors fell.
In 2005, the proportion of online sale of food and beverage was 22% but this rose to 32% in 2010. The figure for video games also grew to 23% in 2010 from 18% in 2005.
In contrast, the percentages of the online shopping sales of two the other sectors decreased. The considerable fall was in home furnishings retail sector. While this figure was 25% of the total online sales of these four sectors in 2005, it dropped to just 15% in 2010. There was also a decrease in the electronics and appliance sectors, which saw a fall from 35% in 2005 to 30% in 2010.
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