• Chữa bài IELTS Task 2

    • HA

      Participant
      June 30, 2017 at 9:22 pm

      Many people like to wear fashionable clothes.

      Why do you think this is the case?

      Is this a good thing or a bad thing?

      The majority of people are keen on choosing classy attires. There are some reasons for this trend which in my opinion, will bring many benefits to both individuals and the economy.

      The tendency to wear stylish clothes can be explained by two main reasons. Firstly, people are apt to suit up to fit current trend. Otherwise, they may have the feeling of being isolated from the community. For example, when joining a party where everybody wears prom dress or suit but you wear T-shirt and jeans, you will look very ridiculous and uncomfortable. Secondly, trendy outfits are essential for people to affirm their social positions. What you wear would tell what kind of person you are and sometimes your fashion plays a vital role in your daily work and life.

      I believe that the habit of wearing fashionable clothes will be positive to each individual and the economy as well. First of all, classy outfits will make people who wear them look better and be more confident in social activities. This may be an additional element for a person’s success. For instance, a well-dressed sales person who sells credit cards to clients may win more deals than an old-fashioned one. In addition, the more trendy clothes people are buying, the more profits fashion companies can make. Each year, big fashion brands such as Zara, H&M and Uniqlo can earn billions of dollars from their chains of stores all over the world. This will be an immense factor contributing to the growth of the economy.

      In conclusion, there are a number of reasons why many people are big fans of stylish clothing. As a result, it could be a good thing to each person and the society as a whole.

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    • anna229112

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      July 1, 2017 at 2:28 am

      Dear learner,
      Please kindly take a look at your corrected work.
      Well done for your impressive progress as a deserving result of the efforts invested in your academic pursuit.
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