Chữa bài IELTS Task 2

In countries (where there is high unemployment) most pupils should be offered only primary education, there is no point in offering secondary education to those who will have no hope of finding a job. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is true that in several nations with the rate of residents being out of works is higher than other ones, almost people have just been passed primary schools. Although some people believe that it is not worth at providing higher educational system such as secondary schools to those who are not interested in getting a job, I hold the idea that inhabitants should equip a good educational standard to achieve better future careers.
On the one hand, the reason why there is no sense at attaining secondary education for those who do not want to have a job is that several vocational jobs are not required their employees to acquire advanced or high study. Dustman, for instance, do not need to have good educational system because their work is just cleaning the streets and classifing rubbish. Another example is the bricklayer which do not require no speacial training or knowledge beacase it is just a manual job.
On the other hand, accomplishing secondary education is neccessary for all people to have better standard of living or a well-paid job. Firstly, secondary educational system provides everyone a wide range of social and essential knowledge and skills, that help their future job a lot. Physics’ knowledge, for example, play an important role in put knowledge gained into practice of an electrician or a plumber. Secondly, achieving secondary education help people have more opportunities to have better future. Because if pupils only attain primary schools, their jobs is just manual ones or unkilled jobs that are not secure careers, while having higher education makes it possible for them to get higher-paid jobs and job prospects. Or after finishing secondary education, they can pursue an advanced education to move up the ladder future career.
In conclusion, it is certainly true that it is pointless to give secondary educational system to people who do not wish to find a job, but it is by no means the key consideration for everybody to stop providing primary students to get higher education.