Chữa bài IELTS Task 2

Some people think that in the modern world we have become more dependent on each other, While others think that people are now more independent.

The revolutionized of technology is promoting significantly .This fact makes human concern with 2 theories about trend action of people in the modern world.Many people believe that humans will have dependent life in community whereas others believed that the tendency will be opposite to this perspective .
Nowaday ,The element of social becomes more dependent on each other than ever .It is truth in some respects that Firstly ,Life is more difficult and expensive .Human have to confront to dangerous disaster such as flood ,earthquake ,typhoon ,drought,and hot phenomenon of earth .These natural calamity has recently appeared for a few early years which devastated artificial financial clearly .The fresh water becomes exhausted everyday.And many emergent phenomenon need to solve by cooperation of human and nations as the aim of European Union.Secontly ,The competition of people to find a available job which caused the amount of unemployed increased considerablely and the young people relies on their parents for longer .Thirly ,people should cooperate with each other on daily working to obtain the highest result such as team work or therapy of EU boost economic by free trade between countries to make more career opportunities.
On the other hand ,some people believe that human will independent with supporting modern technology and useful tools.The revolutionize science and machine produced new generation help us when we want to have machine done.The appearance of Wifi makes us easier to contact internet – a giant information .whole of individual problem can find the solution without needing help.We base on the consequence of technology and science more than rely on each other .Education system gives us the freedom choice and help us become mature and intelligent enough to live well without helping by other people .
In conclusion ,in the modern world ,with the dangerous of disaster and advantages of modernization and industrialization both two tendencies are mention before will able to happen .