Chữa bài IELTS Task 2

Childhood obesity is becoming a serious problem in many countries .Explain the main course and effects of this problem and suggest some possible solutions.
The development of the junk food industry and false lifestyles caused a negative impact on the community. Particularly, most of children have faced with the risk of popular illness that is childhood obesity. This illness widely promotes in the whole of the world as the emerge tendency.There a number of reasons behind the point of view and several solutions to addressing the concerns of children and adult .
There are two main reasons caused this phenomenon .Firstly , most of children have a strong passion in cuisine ,especially with junk food.They dine takeaways such as hamburgers,McDonald’s and drink sugary ,carbonated soft drinks too much.Nowadays,children wants to dine out than dine in whatever they have conditioned to go fast food store.That gradually become a habit in the lifestyles of the young people. Secondly,the Adult too busy to have time to relax and care their family.This reason make it easier for children detrimental to their health by many therapy.As a common hobby ,Children spend excessive time in front of monitor or watch an excessive amount of TV.These signal call common in leading a sedentary life style.Since two reasons,the consequence of this problem become serious than ever.Whole of the young people be in chubby appearance and unhealthy from early ages.Fllowing this phenomenon,Some diseases appear without thoroughly therapy such as diabetes,heart disease and cancer .Within that appearance ,It hardly to do anything ,work any job .In the future ,The young people will become a burden in the community.
The best therapy to resolve that parent co-operate with children repel the development of this problem.Parents should encourage children to have a balanced diet.Eating fresh fruit and vegetable instead dining ready meals.Addtionaly,nutrition foods are necessary for meals.Drinking a lot of water can improve complexion rapidly.Also children attempt to do a plenty of exercise as cycling,going to the gym .On schedule ,The young people have to spend time for outside activities.
In conclusion ,Parent should guide and combine with children to have a healthy habit by having a balanced diet and doing exercise.