• Chữa bài IELTS Task 2

    • danlily231

      Participant
      August 7, 2017 at 10:47 pm

      Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think thatchange is always a good thing.
      Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

      Recently, there has aroused a common tendency that we should rather stay stable than letting a variety of events occur in lives. Many believe that they can reduce a great deal of risks by doing this whereas others claim that changes avoidance is never a wise choice in life. From my perspective, I am wholly in favour of the latter for a number of specific rationales.

      On the one hand, it can be said that staying unchanged would help humans in some respects concerning danger confrontation or effort loss. To explain this, supporters for this idea state that they are too afraid and lazy to cope with such obstacles and fluctuations in their lives. Instead, they are more likely to keep things from variation which might result in perfect peace and stability. Moreover, avoiding changes also brings several benefits in terms of the prevention of risky situations. For example, some people refuse their opportunities of further promotion in their career due to the fear of being judged and isolated.

      Conversely, I would fully argue that the advantages of taking chances and varying our lives completely beat its trivial downsides. Firstly, stepping out of our comfort zone allows us to accept challenges and gain loads of valuable experiences which will empower and strengthen us. As a matter of fact, becoming tough and strong in this modern society is highly considered essential and advantageous. For instance, employees with heavy confidence and willingness to become distinctive and take huge chances tend to be the ones who achieve the most in a company. Secondly, people who adapt to lives packed with changes will probably be filled with more happiness than others. Evidently, it is sure that if repetition can be eliminated from our daily activity, we will lead more meaningful lives and will no longer be bored and frustrated.

      All things considered, while changes avoidance should appear to be a safe and stable choice, in other words, the idea might not only hinder us from success but also lower our power and ability to some extent.

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    • Quynh Anh Nguyen

      Member
      August 10, 2017 at 8:53 am

      Your essay is actually good, although it is too long. I recommend you reduce the words and explain your ideas precisely. Writing too long essay does not mean the high chance of having a better score.

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