Chữa bài IELTS Task 2

Happiness is considered very important in life .
Why is it difficult to define ?
What factors are important in achieving happiness?
Nowadays, most of the people spend a whole of time for working or doing important things which is called with a significantly named “journey to pursue happiness”.Millions of people around the world have millions of definitions about happiness.It is complex for us to identify the true meaning of happiness that many people are pursuing .However ,there are essential elements to have a happy life all of us need to know.
Definition of happiness base on the knowledge of each person in the community and aware about surroundings .For example ,A rich man wants to make more money ,develops his career while a poor man just dream of a full dinning with the casual cloth to overcome the cold weather .Firstly,some people make effort to reach the highest quality life,the opposite pray for a normal life.The aim of life will change when we get on a bit , the older people believe that having a settle down life in small village will make them happy .However, the energetic people want to train theirself by having a big dream such as studying abroad ,traveling around the world,overcoming the limit of self,even welcome to the huge challenge .Secondly ,It is difficult to define the meaning because thought of people will change follow the ages,increasing knowledge ,and after ecperience life ,ups and downs .
From the opinion in the second graph we can know most of happiness caused from the demand of people about financial and mental ,particularly that is healthy ,success ,career and money.From my perspective ,the first important thing to have happiness is a healthy life,when we are in healthy we can do anything we want by the hand,and creat the magic as money ,career.I can make sure a success person will be in happiness life but a rich people can not.Money is the last thing could make us happy ,a person know how to live healthy who use the money in right way to creat significant things to support theirself and the society at large .
In conclusion,The true meaning of happiness word has been a secret ,waiting for the next generation replay .However ,There are some factors things to know to have a happy life.