• Chữa Writing 911

    ivynguyen updated 7 years, 11 months ago 3 Members · 3 Posts
    • Anh

      Participant
      September 4, 2017 at 1:12 pm

      Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding
      change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss
      both views and give your opinion.

      It is generally agreed that changing is a part of life. Hence, some people
      hold the view that change is always bring great benefits to our life while
      others have a tendency to do the same things and do not want to change. In
      this essay, both views will be analyzed in depth.

      To start with, the first view only justified in some cases. The first and
      foremost statement to support this view is that the people who do not want
      to try new things in their life has already felt fulfill and satisfied with
      their circumstance. As a matter of fact, the more secure feeling do people
      have inside them, the least they want to take any risks to break their
      comfort zone. Another merit to take into account is the fact that only when
      people see anyone they know a risk and be successful are the brave enough
      to imitate that action. To be more specific, the older generation lives in
      the countryside in Vietnam has witnessed a small amount of people who dare
      to experience new challenge so that it create a mindset of avoiding change
      is safest.

      As to the second view, this view seems to be more convincing to some
      extents. It is undeniable that changing plays an important role in growing
      up. For example, when people try new experience and meet some failure, they
      might have a lesson to learn and be more rational. Hence, explore new
      things will never be useless in any situations. Another advantage of this
      view is that the world is changing in a rapid way everyday. If only people
      accept to adjust to new things do they be able to fit in this world.

      On the whole, despite some risks that people may face when they experience
      new things, changing opens a door to greater opportunities in the future.
      Therefore, more and more people should step out of their comfort zone and
      emerge to the fast changing world.

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    • anna229112

      Blocked
      September 6, 2017 at 12:25 pm

      [06:25:42, 6/9/2017] Cám ơn các bạn!

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    • ivynguyen

      Participant
      September 6, 2017 at 3:11 pm

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