• Chữa Writing 911

    ivynguyen updated 7 years, 11 months ago 3 Members · 3 Posts
    • Anh

      Participant
      September 4, 2017 at 1:20 pm

      New technologies have changed the way children spend their free time. Do
      advantages of this outweigh disadvantages?

      It is generally agreed that the cutting-edge technology has opened the door
      to greater opportunities for young generation. However, there are some pros
      and cons need to take into consideration in this field. In my opinion, I
      strongly believe that the disadvantages of such phenomenon outweigh the
      advantages in various way.

      To start with, there are surely some benefits that children can have with
      new technologies. First, the innovative devices such as computers or Ipad
      help children to diversified their learning methods. For example, nowadays,
      not only do children learn their lessons on a textbook, but also can
      actually see it virtually through computers. Second, thanks to the
      development of high technology, more and more applicants on smart phone and
      tablet that are designed attractively for children to enrich their
      knowledge effectively.

      However, this phenomenon is not entirely free from drawbacks. The first and
      foremost negative impact that this trend has on children is the increasing
      number of computer addiction or video games to be exact. Due to many hours
      spending on computer games without the discipline from their parents,
      children do not have the awareness of self-control and continue to play
      games nonstop. Therefore, they might be distracted from their study and
      earn lower results. Moreover, health is another merit that need to take
      into account since the children do not take any exercise to improve their
      health. Last but not least, a major devastating effect that this habit
      causes on children is the significant decrease on communication skill.

      On the whole, despite some benefits that children may have when playing
      with modern devices in their leisure time, the adverse effects surely
      outweigh more than benefits. Parents should be more discipline with their
      offspring to prevent unwanted physical and mental problems later on.

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    • mainganha310

      Member
      September 7, 2017 at 12:39 am

      [9/7/2017, 12:39:49 AM] Cám ơn các bạn!

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    • ivynguyen

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      September 7, 2017 at 10:51 am

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