Chữa bài IELTS Task 1

Đề bài: The line graph below shows the percentage of tourists to England who visited four different attractions in Brighton.

Bai Lam:

The given line graph illustrates information about the proportion of visitors going to Brighton’s attractions in England.

First of all, tourists going to Art Gallery occupied 20% in 1980. It experienced a significant increase in 1985 being approximately 40% before bouncing back to the old data in 1990, being 20%. The figure for travellers going to Art Gallery in 1 decade later had small changes, merely ranging around 22% and 20%. But from 2000 to 2010, the percentage went down quite fast, accountig for under 10%.

The second attraction is Pavilion, with the figure being 23% in 1980. The quantity of tourists continued to increase by 27% in the next 15 years, occupying 50% in 1995. It fell to 35% in 2000 and continued to decline to 30% in 2010.

As for Pier, the total proportion of travellers of this attraction fluctuated over the period of 20 years (between 1980 and 2000, mainly around 10% and 13% despite its highest ratio 15% in 1985. The final recorded data in 2010 was 22%, following upward trend. The final category is Festival, it did not have any remarkable change in the same period like other other attractions, ranging from 30% (1980) to 28% (2010).
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