• Chữa Writing 911

    ivynguyen updated 7 years, 11 months ago 3 Members · 4 Posts
    • Đinh

      Participant
      September 12, 2017 at 10:09 am

      Topic: Some people say that a typical teaching of teacher and students in
      the class will not exist by the year 2050. To what extend do you agree or
      disagree?

      It is argued that by 2050 there would be no longer existence of students
      and educators in the class. In this regard, this essay would advocate this
      idea and provide that reasons are the overwhelming dominance of technology
      advancements and the fast pace of human’s life.

      First and foremost, the modern technology has become extremely
      sophisticated that the global citizens are relying on it in every aspects
      of life including education. Nowadays, a distinctive way of learning and
      teaching is applying electronical uses during the lessons in classrooms.
      Furthermore, by the agency of computers, pupils are able to get access to
      the useful information of the lessons more effortlessly. What is more,
      thanks to the appearance of the projector, the educators are not necessary
      to write everything on the board, which is much more time-consuming. At
      recent time, with a computer each, students can find and follow up the
      previous and even upcoming assignments uploaded by teachers. On that
      account, teachers and students may prefer to exchange works through
      Internet.

      Another argumentation is that the inhabitants are now following a lifestyle
      with fast pace. People are more and more busy with their work and social
      life. However, they are too exhausted to leave the house for schools and
      meeting friends directly. For this reason, since the technological industry
      developed and widespreaded, people become lazier and more reliance on
      electronical stuffs. The televisions, computers and smartphones have turned
      into common means of entertainment as well as communication. In addition,
      work and studies can also be done on computers. Therefore, in the near
      future, it is predicted that students will no longer go to school and sit
      in the class. Instead, the screen of computers will take the place of
      classroom vision.

      I would reiterate by saying that the technological industry would possibly
      influence the traditional methods of education.

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    • Đinh

      Participant
      September 12, 2017 at 11:21 pm

      Cảm ơn các banjn!

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    • anna229112

      Blocked
      September 13, 2017 at 2:55 am

      [20:54:58, 12/9/2017] Cám ơn các bạn!

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    • ivynguyen

      Participant
      September 13, 2017 at 10:46 am

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