Chữa bài IELTS Task 2

Film stars and music celebrities may earn a great deal of money and live in luxurious surroundings, but many of them lead unhappy lives. Do you agree?
To what extent is this the price they pay for being famous?

It is true that most of celebrities live in the highest shelf but facing an unprivate life and suffering pressure coming from the public. In my opinion, I agree with that idea and I believe that this is the price of fame for many reasons.
The first point to make is that all of the superstars and well-known people are being adversely interfered with their privacy. As much as people are asked to respect celebrities’ life, they are biased to pry into it. Therefore, plenty of TV and music stars are surrounded by paparazzis and journalists all the time because of that need of people, which has made them to suffer from stress and even led to death. For example, many famous Korean movie actors and actresses has suicide since they couldn’t stand the malice comments from neitizens.
However, I am inclined to believe that being deprived from personal life is the cost that celebrities have to pay and there is no other way to tackle it. The major reason is the relationship between money and reputation. The more a celebrity is famous, the more money she gains and the less privacy she has. For instance, Fan Bing Bing, a famous Chinese star who has always been in Top 10 richest people in China, said that if someone cannot undergo the pressure and hardships of being famous, thay had better live a normal life.
In conclusion, I totally understand that well known celebrities have to let go their private life because of curiousness of people. However, it is the price of reputation which cannot be modified by any way.