Chữa bài IELTS Task 2

Whether or not someone achieve their aims is mostly by luck. Do you agree or disagree?
Many people claim that luck is the key factor that helps people reach their targets. While it is true that luck does contribute to a person’s achievement, I would argue that there are other elements that are much more essential.
To begin with, there are several reasons why luck plays a vitally important in helping people achieve their aims. One of those reasons is that some individuals are lucky to be given talents which others do not have. For example, Lionel Messi who is the most well-known football player in the world already had great skills when he was born. In addition, those who were born with a silver spoon in mouth are fortunate citizens, they are living in prestigious and victory foundation, facilitating them success. This means that people who were born into a very rich family will be inherited the liquid essets from their parents.
However, I believe that other factors are more significant impacts on individual’s success. First, in order to achieve a successful career, people are required to overcome adversities and hardships in their lives, which increases their self-motivation. For instance, Thomas Edison is an inspirational example that success only comes after persistence and work hard. Second, since people are equipped with the specialized skills, they might achieve success easily. For example, Pham Nhat Vuong who is a chairman of VinGroup which is a real estate giant company in Vietnam is able to manage conflicts, motivate and inspire others as well as enforce policies.
In conclusion, while it is true that luck is a necessary factor to realize the targets, I believe that luck is not the most vital element in person’s achievements.