Chữa bài IELTS Task 2

People in many countries today have to spend more and more time away far from their families.
Why? And which effects on the people themselves and their family?
It is true that few mortals have experienced the increase in the amount of time of living far away from their families. From my point of view, there are several reasons should be blamed for generating this trend and there are some obvious influences on people themselves and their family thanks to it.
Some inducement could be listed as the factors creating the trend of increasing the time away far from family. Firstly, studying abroad is one of the most trendy choices of adolescents in many countries since they want to study in better education systems and enhance their personal statures, as the result, they have to live far away from their family. According to some research, about 30% of Vietnamese students decided to apply for some legendary high schools or universities around the world. Moreover, living far away from families gives people more private time, which means they could do whatever they want without the supervision of their family.
There are some effects could be seen as the results of rising the time away far from family. Individuals who spend most of the time away from family are prone to be more independent. To be precise, they might perceive about financial and risk management as well as take care of themselves against diseases or risks. Regarding the family, they could really enjoy their time without worrying about other members of the family since they live far away from them. Consequently, they could release their mind as well as financial burden.
In conclusion, I would suspect that increasing time away far from family is caused a lot of reasons and it would lead to some influences both on the people themselves and their family.