Chữa bài IELTS Task 2

Nowadays, university students focus on one specific subject. However, some people claim that universities should encourage students to study a range of subjects. Do you agree or disagree?
These days, some people argue that it would be better for students if universities motivate them to learn a number of subjects. I strongly disagree with the idea of studying many different subjects instead of focusing on only one subject.
One cannot deny that concentrating on one specific subject would be beneficial for university students. It is impossible to argue against the fact that studying a lot of subjects would distract people from gaining technical knowledge and focusing their favorite subjects. Moreover, students could be felt inconvenient and dissatisfied because they have to face with a mixture of problems from different subjects. Studying too much could not be a good method to encourage and motivate students. As a result, it would be really hard for them to achieve a high academic performance.
Apart from causing the distraction in studying, focusing on a range of subjects in university also effects on the ability to find a good job. Obviously, students have to spend a great deal of time researching and understanding deeply all subjects. Therefore, gaining technical knowledge is difficult for students. However, how to apply their knowledge in the real lives is even harder. In addition, students could not have enough time to improve other skills such as software, communication or second language skills, which also plays an integral part in enrich their knowledge and seek a good job in the future.
In conclusion, there is no doubt that learning on one subject would bring more benefits than a mixture of different subjects.

p/s: xin lỗi vì t phải gửi thế này. lần nào đính kèm file cũng ko gửi đc :((