Chữa bài IELTS Task 2

Living in the city or in the countryside. Discuss and give your opinion. ??
Many people believe that living in big cities gives the best standard of living, whereas others think that living in a countryside is a better choice. I would argue that there are more advantages to living in a developed city than rural areas.
On the one hand, there are some reasons why people prefer to dwell in country sides. The first reason is that the cost of living is lower in small towers. While staying in non-urban areas, people can save a large amount of money such as park fee, community services fee and especially expensive education tuitions for children. Another reason is that travelling is convenient and environment is fresh and clean in small provinces. For example, people can easily get to work without spending hours daily on getting stuck and traffic jams in pollution in the road like living in big cities.
On the other hand, I believe that living in a Centre cities are beneficial because of some undeniable advantages. Firstly, cities always bring greater opportunities and employments since most of big companies concentrate in cities, therefore employees have more many choices following their major and interests. Furthermore, employs in big cities usually offer high salary levers than rural areas. As a result people will have a better standard of living. For instance, being a high wage allows citizens easily to meet their basic need such as buy a comfortable house and perhaps even going holydays.
In conclusion, it seems to me that both living in big cities and countryside have their own unique advantages, but I still prefer settling down in a big city.