Chữa bài IELTS Task 2

It is apparent that young generation nowadays are more powerful and influential than the prior young generations. There are several causes lead to this trend which might affect differently on the relationship between the old and young generation.
On the one hand, there are at least two main reasons why young people now gain more power and influence than before. One reason is that the modern world provides them numerous valuable opportunities to earn experience also money at their early life. Therefore, they’re independent enough to afford their financial requirement, hence it is relatively easy to them to find their worthy position in the society. Another reason is due to the development of technology into many aspects of our lives. The Internet creates young talents chances to be identified and be able to spread their ideas in order to affect positively the community as the whole. This could contribute their trustworthiness to gain more respect as well as recognition from adults.
One major drawback of this trend is that the gap between generations would be widen as young people now may not be humble enough to learn from adults’ experience. They would fancy the idea of doing everything unaided rather than asking for an out-of-date suggestion from their parents. In contrast, the way people interact with each other may be more opened. For instance, a grandpa might ask his grandson how to use an Iphone 6 and the child would be taught to avoid unhealthy content from the Internet, the exchange knowledge could strengthen ties relationship among them.
In conclusion, the modern world brings more advantages for young people to find their voice in the society. This may lead to both negative and positive outcomes of the interactions between them with the prior generations.