Chữa bài IELTS Task 2
Nowadays many countries have seen an extremely fast development in the economy while it has raised the living status in urban areas, the rural have not seen any considerable benefits. There are numerous problems which have been resulted by the unbalanced growth to the whole country and several solutions need to be taken to tackle this trend.
There are at least two negative influences caused by this trend. Firstly, the inequality could widening the gap in the two areas, which may raise the number of people who live in the countryside move into urban cities with a wish of having a better life. Hence, supersize the pressure on education, health services in the cities. Secondly, while a dozen of industries could benefit from the development, it is apparent that agriculture has not seen any noticeable changes. The poor income from farming increases the number of farmers change their job. They may sell their fields to companies building factories or golf courses, the shrinkage of farmland would lead to the lack of agricultural products to meet the local residents’ needs in long term.
There are some solutions need to be taken to prevent those negative outcomes. On the one hand, the local authorities should coporate with some organizations to open courses teaching local people new skills to develop their traditional jobs. This prevent the overload in some big cities as the more jobs available, the less number of the rural jobless move into the cities. On the other hand, the government should apply useful programmes to encourage farmers continue to work in the fields such as guaranteeing the out put of products or providing some advantages for farmers’ children like free education. In addition, offering a preferential rate of pesticides and fertilisers for farmers would be a good option.
In conclusion, the problems caused by the imbalance in economic growth between urban areas and the countryside need to be solved by some imperative actions of the government and the local authorities.Attachments:
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