Chữa bài IELTS Task 1

ban cho minh xin loi khuyen ve body .Cach mieu ta table chart de hieu nhat trong phan nay a

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Explicitly shown in the table was a comparison of the proportion of 65-age group in 3 particular nations (namely Canada,Germany and UK) from 1988 to foresee future in 2030.
In general,the figure of people in age of 65 will be predicted higher than the past.Aditionally,those given countries saw a growing trend in the older population and remained their own rank.
It can clearly be seen from the diagram,in Germany, 20.45% of 65 year-old registered the first position,a difference of precisely 6.22% compares to Unit Kindom in the same year.Besides, between 1988 and 2000, the England saw the similar figure of people in 65 years old,at 14.23% and 14,89% respectively.Meanwhile,during that time,Germany increased rapidly by 5% in the same case.
It can be seen in the future that Canada and Germany will be on top at around 10% increased from the 1988.Meanwhile, Unit Kindom will be expected at 20.35% in 2030,a gap of 6.12% compared to the original data at the onset.