• Chữa bài IELTS Task 2

    • Thao Pham

      Participant
      June 17, 2019 at 8:34 am

      The media should include more stories which report good news. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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      Target: 6.0 Writing

      The media should include more stories which report good news. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

      It is sometimes argued that new coverage should report good news. Personally, I partly agree with this view, The news should be reporting all issues happening around the world in terms of gain people’s awareness.

      On the one hand, there are so many public impacts of reporting more good stories on news that inform people about good things are happening around the world, these can drive people to strengthen the morale of the public. Firstly, breakingthrough has been making front page headline to achieved a host of certain cancer types treatment which are good news for one of the most difficult cures disease. Secondly, the supporting undeveloped countries from volunteers are positive noticeable news that should be broadcast frequently.

      On the other hand, new coverage should also reporting other contemporary issues such as environmental issues, climate change, which are facing the human life nowadays as they need to be involved in saving the planet. For example, the environment is becoming worse by a large number of wasting by individuals .There are so many campaigns to appeal to people for recycling nylon and these keep expanding the coverage recently. It can be seen that the media seems a key of supporting to increase those awareness by carried out more news. If these problems are ignored by the media, only interested in good news, there will be a climb of ecological crisis. Therefore, the media should take the responsibility in terms of calling to action intermediately.

      In conclusion, more broadcasting in both bad and good news are necessary in order to infomed knowledge of contemporary issues are happening around people.

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    • congthanh

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      June 18, 2019 at 7:48 pm

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