Chữa bài IELTS Task 1
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The pie charts below give data on the spending and consumption of resources by countries of the world and how the population is distributed.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.The three charts illustrate the proportion of expenditure on basic needs, population and resources consumption worldwide.
Overall, people in the world spend most money on other needs. Although Asians account for largest population in the world, America and European consume more than half of world resources.
According to the first chart, the most common expenditure is on other categories, which is 40%, followed by food purchase, at 24%. By contrast, the percentage of clothes expense is only 6%, whereas this figure is doubled for housing and tripled for moving.
Meanwhile 57% population in the world is Asian, the amount of people who live in Africa and other nations are the least, at 10% and 5%, respectively. Coincidently, Europe and the USA’s population are the same, which is 14% each. Surprisingly, citizens in those countries consume the largest amount of world resources, which is 60%. Thus, 40% remaining resources are separated for other countries.Attachments:
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