• Chữa bài IELTS Task 1

    • vuvietphuong1236

      Participant
      June 19, 2019 at 12:42 pm

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      Explicitly shows in the bar chart is a comparison of how much time Finlander wastes for contacting with other people in term of three different categories ( local-landline,national and international – landline and mobiles) for a decade, from 1995. Units are measured in minutes.
      Overall,the expenditure of times population made phone calls in the provincial area which were by far higher than that of others.Meanwhile the amount of times were spent in two remaining cases increased significantly during ten years,compared with the decreased trend of local-landline since 2001.
      In terms of regional phone calls, from 1995 to 2001, there was a slight growth in the millions of minutes consumed by Finlander,by 1000 million minutes per year,until it reached to the peak at 17000 in 2001.However, over that period, the data of the local – landline was falling down to 12000 which was equal numbered in 1995.
      By contrast,Both Internation-landline and mobiles witnessed a rapidly climb, especially in case of smartphones.At the onset ,there was a few people using Mobiles to make telephone calls above zero,compared to 6000 of national and foreign calls.Until 2004,Both rose to the highest data on their own categories,just under 10000 minutes in mobiles and above 10000 in the remaining.

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    • congthanh

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      June 20, 2019 at 7:51 pm

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      Grammar: https://IELTSPLANET.INFO/COURSE/IVY-GRAMMAR/
      Writing: https://IELTSPLANET.INFO/COURSE/PHUONG-PHAP-DON-GIAN-VIET-BAI-IELTS-WRITING-8-0/

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