Chữa bài IELTS Task 1

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The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart gives data on the proportion of 6 separated groups of age with regard to both genders in Australia who took exercises regularly in 2010.
Overall, women in nearly all stages of age did exercises more frequently than men. By contrast, the first group gave an exceptional result.
From 15 to 24 years old, while the number of women rose steadily, that of men dropped significantly. Although 52,8% of adolescent boys did physical activities, which was around 5% higher than girls, this figure experienced a sudden plunge to 42.2%, which was 6% higher than women in 25 to 34 group. The discrepancy between two genders became more notable since 52.5% women did exercises more daily than men, at only 39.5% in terms of 35 to 44 group.
According to the older groups, the number of women reached a peak of 53.3%, yet this figure fell slightly to 47.1% at the last group. While women group had a tendency to fall, men group witnessed an upward trend from 43.1% to 46.7%. At the end, the difference between two genders was not as considerable as previous ones.