Chữa bài IELTS Task 1
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The pie charts show the main reasons for migration to and from the UK in 2007.
The pie charts illustrate important reasons why immigrants and emigrants came and moved from the UK in 2007.
It is clear that employment accounted for the largest proportion of migration to and from the Uk in 2007.
The purpose of migration for inhabitants in UK was that relating to work and study. The biggest proportion of immigration and emigration of people in UK was on the definite job, accounting for nearly 30%. Besides, 22% of emigrants left the UK to look for work, which was almost twice as much as the figure for immigrants, at 12%. Moreover, the percentage of purpose to pursue formal study in immigration was six times of emigration.
Furthermore, there was some the remaining reasons for migration in UK. The percentage of purpose to accompany of immigration and emigration was similar, made up 15% and 13% respectively. While people refused to give specific answers in emigration that was triple that of immigration.The overall answer is on-point and correct, however, adding more vocabulary is recommended
Also, adding more linking device to create better coherence allow you to gain more marks
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