Chữa bài IELTS Task 1

The table below shows the percentage of the population by age groups in
one town who rode bicycles in 2011.

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Task 1: The table below shows the percentage of the population by age groups in
one town who rode bicycles in 2011.
Age group
Female
Male
0 – 9
51.3
50.3
10 – 17
42.2
24.6
18 – 39
17.1
9.7
40 – 59
12.3
8.0
60+
18.5
13.2

The table illustrates information about the rate of people in the town who rode bicycles in terms of age and sex, in 2011.
Overall, the propotion of female rode bycicle is always higher than the one of male regardless of group age. Besides, the rate of younger people virtually higher than the olders.
The figures for children who were under 9 years old were highest, in both of the boys and girls, with 51.3% and 50.3 % respectively. Besides, those girls became the most crowned people group who rode bycicle. In the group of age from 10 to 17 years old, with 42.2%, the propotion of female was twice as high as the one of male, just 24.6%.
However, with adults who were from 18 to 39 years old, the rate of them riding bicycles significantly decreased to 17.1% and 9.7%, for woman and man respectively. In all of the group ages, the figures for group age from 40 to 59 years old were lowest, especially for male, just 8.0%. However, the propotion of eldests who were over 60 years old slightly rose and reach to 18.1 % and 13%, respectively for female and male.