Chữa bài IELTS Task 1

The tables depict the temperatures and daylight hours in two different cities during the same week in May 2017.
Overall, the Mumbai’s temperatures were hotter in comparison to Moscow, while daylight hours in Moscow prolonged more than in Mumbai.
As far as temperatures of these cities are concerned, the weather in Mumbai was relatively hot as ranging from 29 to 34. Saturday was when the weather reached a peak of 34, and both days had the same lowest temperature, at 29. Conversely, temperatures of Moscow varied from 2 to 13, which temperature disparity was higher than India. Sunday was the hottest day in Moscow, whereas its temperature dropped to 2 on Saturday.
In terms of the daylight period, the sunrise hour on both days in India was the similarity, at 6:00 am. Additionally, 7:05 pm was when the sun set on Friday and Sunday, which was 10 minutes sooner than on Saturday. By contrast, sunset hour in Moscow was 10:00 pm from Friday to Sunday, while hours of sunrise were unequal, at 4:15 am, 4:05 am and 4:10 am respectively.
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