Chữa bài IELTS Task 2
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Although scientifically proven a detriment to human health if consumed excessively, fast food such as Pizza and Hamburgers is a popular choice among modern people.
What types of people usually consume fast food, regardless of being aware of its negative effects on their health?
Should the government merely do something to restrain consumers’ need for such a kind of product or should they do something else?My name is Duyen. Please find attached below your essay corrected by me. If you have any concerns about my correction, please do not hesitate to leave me feedbacks. Thank you very much for joining us. Hope to receive your next essays. Good luck!
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