Chữa bài IELTS Task 2

Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults.

It is argued that youngsters should be stimulated to develop their competitiveness. While some individuals say that the youngsters should be trained in co-operation environment instead of trying to competing each other. I would argue that it would be better to teach children how to grow their competitive abilities in their lives.
On the one hand, I believe that it has variety benefits to encourage teenagers in developing their sense of competition. The first reason is that, the young people are able to grow their creativity and thinking abilities. Undergoing contents, the youngster is likely to work independently and his/her capability of solving problems will be more sensitive than others. Furthermore, the young people will find the life purposes easily. By competing with others, trying to do something or even expressing yourself, children know clearly what they need and how they have to do to obtain their aims effectively.
On the other hand, some people think that the youngsters should be educated to co-operate with each other people in order to become helpful adult. Firstly, they may have opportunities to learn each others. For instant, students often organize small group lessons before each exam to practice and exchange their lacking knowledge to improve their missing lessons. Secondly, the youngsters can learn how to respect other ideas and care about other thinking. They will try to combine with friend to complete a thing, for instant, a soccer competition or even a small school assignment. This is a great way to educate cleverly children are able to connect their friends together to guarantee long-term cooperation relationships.
In conclusion, although each other have their own unique advantages, I still agree that the young people should be encouraged to grow their competition abilities instead of educating in liking environment.