• Chữa bài IELTS Task 2

    • Trần Ngọc Phấn

      Participant
      December 9, 2016 at 11:26 pm

      Early technological developments brought more benefits and changes to the
      lives of ordinary people than recent technological developments. What is
      your opinion?
      Give reasons and include any relevant examples form your own knowledge or
      experience.

      It is true to say that technological developments bring many advantages and
      big changes to the lives of ordinary people. In my opinion, I think both
      early technology developments and present technology developments
      contribute differently but still be important part in human evolution and I
      will show you in this essay.

      First of all, in 19th century and 20th century, there was the greatest
      industrial revolution. As a result, people life changed completely because
      of many incredible things appeared. In this era, the appearances of
      machines like turbine motors , computers, vehicles, telephones and more
      brought many advantages to normal life. Because of useful machines workers
      could work fewer but the productivity was higher. Early technology was a
      sound basis for the later developments of technology.

      Secondly, present technology has become an essential part of life. For
      instance, the fast growing of Internet and the amount users are the
      clearest evidence of the benefits brought by recent technological growth.
      It will be a mistake if we do not talk about information technology. The
      way of working, living has changed totally in this IT age. Moreover,
      information technology has been the best necessary tool for everyone from
      scientists to children when they work, study or entertain. Thank for
      information technology, you can look up all information just by one click,
      discuss every issues with your friends all over the world and many things
      else.

      In conclusion, the developments of technology in past or present have
      brought different conveniences for people. These changes of the
      developments prove that human are intelligent and have incredible
      creativity.

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    • My Trương

      Member
      December 13, 2016 at 12:46 pm

      Corrected! Feel free to leave any comment.

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