• Chữa bài IELTS Task 2

    • huyenk38ueh

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      December 14, 2016 at 8:58 am

      It’s generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for music and sport, and others are not. However, it’s sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become good sports person or musician.
      Discuss the two ideas giving your opinion.

      It is widely argued that some individuals have distinctive capacities upon being born. Whereas other people think that children have to undergo long-term duration of training and exercising, I personally believe that to comprehensively develop, youngsters should be stimulated to practice and study from others.
      On the one hand, exceptional skills of men have straight after being born are unrealistic. One reason is that special circumstances about genius account for a significantly very small proportion on the world. Abert Einstein, for instance, a well-know mathematic of 20[th] century, he also developed his abilities when he was 26 years old. Another reason is that only depending on aptitudes when being born with are, youngsters can not guarantee successful career in the future. Because these abilities need to nurture by studying and guiding from other individuals and outside activities related to improve effectively.
      On the other hand, education and exercise play an integral role in skills development processes. First, the ancients have a saying “diligence in place of intelligence”. Long time ago, the people have understood the meaning of practice in our life to become a skillful person in particular fields. Furthermore, through hard-working workout, people can obtain a variety of merits than expected. For instance, Cristiano Ronaldo – a shinning example of practice, who was born in Madeira, he has four Golden Ball at age 32 – the greatest achievement of a player’s nationality European countries.
      In conclusion, for the reasons I have mentioned above, I strongly believe that in order to become a popular person, one must be extremely hard-working to complete oneself perfectly.

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      December 15, 2016 at 5:47 pm

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