Chữa bài IELTS Task 1
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The three bar charts below illustrate a survey of the taste of music album
in Britain by sex and age.In the first Pop Music bar chart, the amount of people in range of 16 – 24
and 25 – 34 years old are around 30% and above. Then, it is similar in Rock
bar chart. However, for the Classical Music – the last graph, people older
than 45 years old takes the most percentage at 20% and followed by 25 – 34
age group, which is appropriate 16%.According to the graphs, it can be seen clearly that the number of male
buyers is slightly more than female buyers in all types of music. The
percentage of female consumers is softly lower than the male around 8 – 10%
for Pop and Rock Music, 2 – 3% for Classic Music. Finally, the quantity in
the classic is dramatically less than two others.In conclusion, there are some differences from the consumers of three kinds
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