• Chữa bài IELTS Task 1

    • Trần Ngọc Phấn

      Participant
      December 30, 2016 at 8:58 pm

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      The three bar charts below illustrate a survey of the taste of music album
      in Britain by sex and age.

      In the first Pop Music bar chart, the amount of people in range of 16 – 24
      and 25 – 34 years old are around 30% and above. Then, it is similar in Rock
      bar chart. However, for the Classical Music – the last graph, people older
      than 45 years old takes the most percentage at 20% and followed by 25 – 34
      age group, which is appropriate 16%.

      According to the graphs, it can be seen clearly that the number of male
      buyers is slightly more than female buyers in all types of music. The
      percentage of female consumers is softly lower than the male around 8 – 10%
      for Pop and Rock Music, 2 – 3% for Classic Music. Finally, the quantity in
      the classic is dramatically less than two others.

      In conclusion, there are some differences from the consumers of three kinds
      of music albums.

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    • An Thien Ho

      Member
      December 31, 2016 at 8:29 pm

      Hello,

      Please review my comments for your writing.

      All the best.

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