Chữa bài IELTS Task 2

Question: It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good at sport person or musician.

These days, an increasing number of people are concerned about well-known individuals in sport or music. While I accept that some people who are successful in these fields, having natural ability, I would argue training could contribute to their big achievement.
To begin with, it is undeniable some gifted sport people and musicians reveal their talents at their young ages as inborn ability. They might learn knowledge and skills to become sport or music professional people faster than the others. For example, Mozart has been a typically talented musician in the global, who could compose and perform his works around four years old. We should mention about Maradona and Pele as gifted citizens of football. However, I believe that there are a few talented people who have ability at early ages and they also need training to develop their proficiencies. If Mozart’ father would not have been a musician and Mozart could not have trained at his childhood, he had not became one of the most famous celebrities in the world.
It seems to me that children might be good at music and sport when they receive enough education. The recorded data have proved that universities, colleges and special training centers have created many famous people in the sport and music fields. It can be seen many countries in the world have renowned football teams and most of players are trained when they are children with severe schedules. Well-known musicians are taught in professional environment with strictly practice schemes.
In conclusion, there are few people become geniuses at the young ages by natural abilities. However, I think that most of children might become starts in the sport and music skies if they undergo harsh practices