Chữa bài IELTS Task 2

It should be necessary for parents to attend a parenting training course to learn how to bring their children up. Do you agree or disagree?

These days, an increasing number of people have concerned about child care classes. It is believed that it is better for couples to participate parent training class to have useful knowledge and skills for taking care their children, and I agree with this point.
It is undeniable that bringing up children is long and complicated work while many couples do not attend any parenting classes, especially parents in developing countries. Most of them learn experience and skills from their parents and people around after they have babies. Therefore, simple works such as holding, washing or feeding infants, but they are really very difficult for new couples. Noncomplexed children’s illness like fever, cough or vomiting may make parents become worry because of lacking of experience and knowledge. Participating the classes help parents taking care their children in effective and scientific ways. For example, parents might acquire preparation of suitable diets for children, how to massage to help children’ blood circulation supporting for their development.
In addition, attending the classes bring plenty of benefits for couples to support their children accumulating knowledge and experience to comprehensive development. It is clear that children are immature, and parents are first teachers, so parents need to look after them not only metal but also physical development. Participating take care courses help parents obtain useful and scientific ways about how to teach or make friend with teenagers, how to prevent them from negative impacts such as juvenile crime, bullying, drug and alcohol use which are very necessary for children’ life.
In conclusion, it seems to me that parents had better to join parenting training class to get knowledge and skills to bring up successfully their children.