• Chữa bài IELTS Task 1

    • Nguyễn Trần Mai Anh

      Participant
      February 24, 2017 at 10:02 pm

      The graph below shows relative price changes for fresh fruits and
      vegetables, sugars and sweets, and carbonated drinks between 2978 and 2000.

      Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and
      make comparisons where relevant.

      Write at least 150 words.

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      Data are from the Bureau of Labor Statistics and represent the U.S. city
      averages for all urban consumers in January of each year.

      The line graph illustrates data on the price trends among three types of
      food products and the consumer-price index in America from 1978 and 2009.

      Overall, the USA saw a general increase in all of rates. Although the four
      figures were similar in terms of the steady growths, the price for fresh
      fruits and vegetables hold the highest position in most of time.

      In the year 1979, all of lines on the graph started in the same point, at
      approximately 65. Although the three trends in prices for sugars and
      sweets, consumer-price index and carbonated drinks had the same gradual
      rise, the numbers of sugar and sweet and carbonated drinks were always
      consistently below the other’s, which reached its peak at about 210 in
      2009. After a minor fluctuation between 1981 and 1983, sugar and sweet
      experienced a slow increase before hitting the highest place at 200 in
      2009, which was higher than the final result of carbonated drinks (150) in
      the same year.

      The changes in the price for fresh fruits and vegetables grew dramatically,
      especially after 1989. Beginning at 60 on the graph, after a period of 30
      years, its price hit the peak at approximately 300 in 2009.

      (201 words)

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