Chữa bài IELTS Task 2

Task 2:
Nowadays, People are tending to travel more than ever prior to. I believe that it is a inevitable result of modern world.
There are some reasons behind this case. Firstly, increasing GDP per capita result to people’s life is improved over time, they have the ability to shopping, entertainment, and travelling as a higher living standard. Secondly, in modern integration, understanding civilizations is very important and many people consider travelling as a good way for them to cultivate directly cultural knowledge from places in the world. Thirdly, it is now easy to travel by modern vehicles and synchronous infrastructure, people can move faster with cheaper cost to anywhere which they want.
Below are some of advantage of travelling for traveller. Travelling help them to relax and enjoy time with their family after period of time to be under high pressure of work and oppressive atmosphere. In additional, they can learn more about cultural and social knowledge which is more and more necessary for life, especially amid globalization is happening more than ever period. In my experience, I was learned about culture of time when I traveled to Japan five years ago, being on time is present anywhere in there. It is really affect to my life, I have never wake up late anymore. Simultaneously I also have had a wonderful opportunity to study of Japanese.
In conclusion, to be supported by strong economy and international integration travelling will continue to go up in the following years, with the benefits of travelling, people should take a trip at least once a year.