Chữa bài IELTS Task 1
The chart shows the number of mobile phones and landlines per 100
people in selected countries.The bar chart the differences between the number of moble phone and landline users in some contries.
It is clear that the Danish are overall the highest landline users. In terms of mobile phones, the highest number goes to Italy.
There is a slight difference in the users of phones in Denmark. Nearly 9000 people use landline services and over 8000 people use cellphones. More noticeable differences could be observed in the figures for Canada and US. In Canada the number of landlines is twice as much as that of mobile phones, reaching a remarkable of 6000. The same goes for US as the figure for landlines is nearly 7000 as opposed to below 5000 of mobile phones.
Looking into an opposite trend, 8000 people choose mobile phone services in Italy which is a double of landlines’number. Uk and Sweden’s cellphone figures are both about 2000 higher than residential phones’. Smaller change could be seen in Germany as reflected only 10 difference between Mobiles and landlines.Attachments:
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