Chữa bài IELTS Task 2

Some people believe it is a good idea to live in skyscrapers or tall buildings. Others believe it is better to live in small houses with gardens. Discuss both views and give your opinion?
There is an argument whether people live in skyscrapers ans tall buildings or it is better to stay in tiny houses with gardens. While staying in high-rise buildings has some advantages, I would argue that living in small houses with garderns is much more beneficial.
On the one hand, there are several reasons why some believe that it is a brilliant idea to live in high-rise buildings. One of those reasons is that those buildings are usually well-equipped with the recreational facilities and accessible services such as cinemas or suppermarkets. As a result, citizens may entertain and shop at the same area without having to travel a long distance, which saves a substantial amount of time. Additionally, most high-rise buildings will have proffessional security guards and elevator access control systems, which ensures the safety of citizen’s life. This means that there can be a lower risk of theft, tempring, and break-ins.
On the other hand, I believe living in small homes with gardens has more significant benefits. First, since people stay in tiny houses, this would be easier to evacuate in case of emergency such as earth quakes or fire. If citizens live in high-rise buildings with complicated huge structures, they may find it difficult to escape from the buildings when they face a natural disaster, which leads to life-threatening. Second, by staying in small houses with gardens that are closely associated with a mimic of nature, people can spend leisure time doing their own interests such as planting flowers or growing vegetables and fruits. In fact, as veggies and fruits people buy from the marketplace are prone to have remnant pesticides which can be detrimental to health, individual gardens can be a source of fresh produce which is safe to consume.
In conclusion, while living in skyscrapers and high-rise buildings is beneficial for people to some extent, I believe that choosing to stay in small houses with gardens is a better option.