Chữa bài IELTS Task 2

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There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the International music that is heard everywhere nowadays?
In this day and age, there are a range of music styles. No one can deny the positive things music bringing for our daily lives. Besides, the question about the role of traditional music and international music we are enjoying remain is a source of controversy. To me, both of them are equally important.
There a many convincing explanations why music impact on our lives positively. Firstly, we tend to enjoying songs for entertainment purpose. In more details, people need to refresh their mind after a hectic schedule and music is exactly a great therapy for them. Secondly, regarding a research conducted which involves that listening to music regularly will assist both mental physical health a lot. It supports people to show their emotions more. In addition, it also reduces the aggressive attitude of people, making them to be optimistic. Plus, if the mothers who are in pregnant let their babies listen to music frequently, these kids might be more creative and smatter.
In terms of traditional music, it expresses the culture and customs of a country. Moreover, it also connects people to the past and reminds us of keeping and reserving the national identity. However, the existence of international music is no less important. Pop songs or rap songs in recent years have not only a really catchy melody but also meaningful lyrics. For instance, “Hall of fame” by The Script and Will I am transfers inspiration to each individual. It recalls people confidently achieve their dreams. Moreover, by listening foreign music, we can cultivate more new knowledge about their culture and tradition.
To conclude, music is an extremely vital part of life. Besides, regardless of traditional music or international music that both play a crucial role, becoming a kind of recreation.