Chữa bài IELTS Task 2

Many people around the world are choosing to move to live in cities .What problem do people experience in big cities?Should governments encourages people to move to smaller down.
Many recent years ,most of people in the world want to have settled down life in large cities.The increasing popular trend base on the benefit that the center cities can give us .To prohibited unbalanced phenomenon happen that the governments should have effective solutions to this problem.
If you have ever try to live in a big city for 1 week or even 2 days, I make sure that you will not want to leave there because some reasons below.Firstly,Livng in the great cities that we will live in high living condition .For example,from the security system in the community to the famous hospitals or the psychology service ,all of them will make you pleasant with the great quality .Secondly, most of people want to live in city town from the commune who hope to have more opportunities career to develop ,even change their life .In particular, Both the salary and the treatment at the work places in city are better than in the villages.Thirdly ,the entertainment industry in the city devolpes rapidly and leads the top of trend.As we know ,it is centre destination to organaize social events , international festivals,and concert of famous singer such as Rihanna,Adele.
On the other hand, that phenomenon will negative influence in the society at large .That is reason why government should do immediately is to consider balanced of inhabitants area .Base on the demand of whole of people,the governments should metamorphose small countries into resort destinations to occupy the spotlight .Furthermore ,encouraging business man to built their factory in there which make more jobs for people .A consider solution that building the new traffic system to decrease times to go somewhere.It is potential ideal make people change their thought that living in the big city is not necessary to have a love life.
In conclusion,Althought living in the big city make more opportunity for people ,The governments should have positive behaviour to balanced inhabitant and the future workforce.