Chữa bài IELTS Task 1

Task 1: The chart below shows the annual pay (thousands of US dollars) for doctors and other workers in seven countries in 2004.

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Target: 6.0 Writing

Task 1: The chart below shows the annual pay (thousands of US dollars) for doctors and other workers in seven countries in 2004.

The chart illustrates the annual pay for doctors and other workers in seven countries in 2004. It is clear that the money that doctors earn annually is higher than other workers.

The annual pay for doctors in The US accounted for the largest amount of total money, peaked at 120 thousands of US dollars, while only about 50 thousands of US dollars that doctors in Finland earned. France took up the same salary as Switzerland approximately 70 thousands of US dollars, which were higher than the rest of countries Italy, Czech Republic and Germany.

By contrast, the annual pay for other workers was lower than doctors. The US occupied the highest proportion of other workers’ income compares with Switzerland at 40 thousands of US dollars. A similar amount of money was earned in Italy, Czech Republic and German, which was at 20 thousands of US dollars. France and Finland made up about 30 and 25 thousands of US dollars of the pay respectively.