Chữa bài IELTS Task 2
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Target: 6.0 Writing
Đề thi 12/05/2018
Task 2: Some people think that a huge amount of time and money is spent on the protection of wild animals, and that this money could be better spent on the human population. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Many people argue that we should spend a huge amount of money and time on the human population than spent on wild animals conservation. Personally, I completely disagree with the opinion given, because wild animal diversity is a part of the world as it related to human life.
The main reason is that human modern life has been affected by animals natural habitat, which leads to facing wildlife extinction results. For instance, industrials are wasting a huge amount of waste to marine life every day driving to the consequences of animals extinction that provides human daily meals. As a result, the revenue from sea animals decreases significantly, which can affect not only for human nutrition but also business selling and it may lead to economic impacts. For this reason, preserving wild animals is way more important than ever.
Furthermore, wildlife always a source of researching and learning from different fields. For example, in terms of human history, scientists research based on animals development such as Gibbon, therefore, the protection of this animal is necessary. Another good example is national zoo where is well-known by encouraging people to learn about wildlife, especially children. They will have a chance to see real animals and get closer to the real environment, these will gain awareness of wild animals conservations.
In conclusion, I disagree with the view expressed in this statement, there are several benefits of protecting wild animals in order to save the nature life that directly affects human life every day.
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